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Jimmy and Karen were not the perfect couple. They argued alot, cursed each other out, and literally beat the crap out of each other most of the times. But at some points they would love and care for each other. One day as soon as Karen heard Jimmy cheated on her, she was pissed off and wanted some revenge. So she waited for the perfect time to strike.

"Hey babe, so why did you call me again?" Jimmy asked, walking into her house and flopping down on the couch.

"Oh nothing sweetie. I just wanted to watch a movie with you thats all." Karen smiled and said with the sweetest voice she could make.

"Why with that goodie goodie voice? You know I hate that shit sometimes." Jimmy put bluntly making Karen flinch while the rage in her only grew.

"I'm sorry." She apologized and sat next to him on the couch and played the movie.

The horror movie played and they watched it for about an horror. Jimmy laughed while Karen snickered from here and there. She struck once she saw Jimmy's head begin to nod off to sleep.

"Oh your falling asleep." Karen said.

"Yeah I hate when I get tired like this, shit! I didn't even want to spend the night over here." Jimmy complained.

"Oh why is that? Is it because of that whore you left at your house hours ago before seeing me?" Karen let out in rage making Jimmy's head turn in shock and surprise.

"What babe? You know I would nev-..."

"BULLSHIT! You are the most evillest piece of shit I have ever met in my life! Now your going to pay! And I do mean pay!" Karen smirked and laughed with her face in a mixture or anger and laughter.

"How are you going to do that? Huh? Your weak, you can't even whoop me." Jimmy taunted her but Karen simply snapped her finger's and her friend Kimberly came from behind and knocked Jimmy out with a frying pan.

"Sweet dreams Jimmy." Karen simply whispered into his ears before he blacked out.

"You....Bi...."

"Now help me get him upstairs Kimberly. You got the stuff right?" Karen asked.

"Oh yeah I got it." Kimberly said pulling out a syringe filled with pink fluid.

"Excellent. This will be great!" Karen laughed with joy.

Karen and Kim took Jimmy's unconscious body up to her room and placed him in her bed. They each of his arms and legs to one corner of the bed and slipped off all his clothes except for his boxers. Karen signaled for Kim to give her the syringe and she did. Her plan was about to begin.

"This will teach him." She said injecting the needle in his arm and pushed all the pink fluid in. "Now, hehehehehehe. For the fun." Karen stood back and observed her work.

The pink fluid coursed through Jimmy's body and begin to shift around his insides while changing his outward appearance. Karen first noticed his dirty blonde hair begin to flow now and became longer and look more cleaner now.

"Wow this crap actually does work." Kim said examining the empty syringe.

"I know." Karen added looking over Jimmy's now softer and more round out face. "This will be so much fun!" She exclaimed.

"If you say so." Kim agreed with a shrug.

Next, Jimmy's body began to slim down greatly. All his muscles and body hair was now gone in an instant. It put such a smile on Karen's face. His now smaller body begin curve into a perfect figure while some of his fat moved and plumped up his butt some making it softer. His feet grew smaller as well.

"This is perfect. Exactly what he deserves." Karen glared over her changing boyfriends body with such rage she nearly punched it if it wasn't for Kim to be there.

"Calm down. Don't hit him while the changes go on." Kim pleaded with Karen nodding.

Jimmy's manhood slipped inside him and vanished completely, leaving him now fully a women. His legs grew smooth and slender while his chest produced two C-Cup sized breast. As soon as the mounds of flesh popped up, Karen put a frilly bra over them and a pair of panties around between his legs.

"Okay its done!" Karen shouted with glee looking over her triumph. This will show his ass a thing or two." She put a pair of blue pajamas over her boyfriends body and kicked him out of the bed waking him up.

"Ouchie, What the hell is going o-..." Silence ensued when Jimmy's vision cleared. His mouth dropped open and he slowly made his way to the mirror across the room. "The hell i'm a girl!" He turned to his girlfriend angrily. "Bitch turn me back!" She demanded.

"Hmph." Karen simply walked over and gave her the hardest smack she could. "Quiet you little whore. Here's how this will work. You will do whatever me and Kimberly say, got it?" She asked.

"And if I refuse?" Jimmy simply shot back causing a sinister grin to appear around Karen's lips.

"Oh then i'll use the other needle and turn you into a slave and make you do all kinds of stuff to dudes. But it you follow my orders then everything will be fine...For us..." She laughed.

"I'm not gonna be with no dudes!" Jimmy cried out but Karen smirked.

"Hmph, the perfect revenge. I won't do that to you. I'll make you go out on all sorts of dates just like that with you still having your old mind. Hehehehehe, yeah that will be sweet." Karen teased Jimmy.

"You can't do that!" Jimmy pleaded but was silenced.

"Quiet Jamie! Or I will turn you into a bimbo with no regrets and release you to the world. Now be a good girl and sit on the bed before I change my mind." Karen ordered while Jamie simply nodded and did so.

"Wow Karen. How long do you plan on doing this?" Kim asked.

"Until my revenge is done and I just said the plan too. Yep she is gonna go on all kinds of dates with thee outfits I give her." Karen and Kim giggled whilst turning towards Jamie.

"Oh no, please babe! I'm sorry for cheating on you and everything." She pleaded.

"To late! Now lets find you something to wear for tonight. This revenge is just getting started." Karen stated happy that her revenge she finally got was about to get even sweeter.
To get back in the mode i'm gonna do a series of short stories... Hope you like this one... Excuse the swears that I put in this... If it might be some... XD


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:iconmatrixmaster3018:
MatrixMaster3018 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Can I have her number, I have a few targets I want revenge on myself >:D
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98sparkz Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Student Artist
XD Hahaha she wouldn't mind giving it to you =w=''''
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:iconmatrixmaster3018:
MatrixMaster3018 Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Swag xD
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Student Artist
XD
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sallyane Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015
wow what a great way of getting revenge well done girl love this cap now for the fun part to start would love to read more of this
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beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
Can someone hook me up with her, she hot!
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Student Artist
lol good luck with that my friend.
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AaronRWilson Featured By Owner Edited Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wonder what Karen would say if her cheating man had my views? Answer for Karen.


Karen
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"Oh then i'll use the other needle and turn you into a slave and make you do all kinds of stuff to dudes. But it you follow my orders then everything will be fine...For us..." She laughed.


Jimmy
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Let me get this straight! You turned me into a girl out of revenge yet I still like women. If I stay like this you know very well I will take the other needle with  changes .

(Jimmy checked her own breast and crotch.)


Jimmy
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Do you know what a woman was born to do romantically?  Get the needle, end my suffering by taking away any chance of me being a bisexual and lesbian.


Kim
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What's wrong with being bisexual or lesbian!


(Jimmy blinked)


Jimmy
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Are you nuts woman? You was physically born to be a mother!  I personally will not allow myself to be in a  relationships that is against holy marriage between a woman and her man. Karen turned me into a female, by being Karen's created it's her job to raise me up as her daughter and eventually turned me into  a bride and give her grand kids.


Kim
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Do you want to turn  girl Jimmy into a heterosexual woman, Karen? 
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student Artist
lol.
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AaronRWilson Featured By Owner Edited Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Im guessing lol is Karen's response, but regardless Karen must get serious and provide a response to her friend and Jimmy. 


( As for my views? You can't really laugh, it's  the traditional honor of the roles between a man and woman in a household, you was born from those choices by parents either way)
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student Artist
(I see) (And not really her response...)
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AaronRWilson Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You made the story. I just want to know what you think Karen would of probally said in my first post! 
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98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student Artist
okay thanks for clearing up.
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:iconbeetlelion12:
beetlelion12 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014
No kidding!
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:iconbrammatic:
Brammatic Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
i like the revenge i mean he did deserve it
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:iconthewalkingarmy:
thewalkingarmy Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
That women is scary.Never want to date her
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student Artist
mhm
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Dinomaster75 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Do wanna know what's cruel make him/her actually like guys but still keep his mind, so that way she would kinda tear herself apart from the inside.
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Artist
lol horrible but well they'll prob do something like that already XD
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:icondinomaster75:
Dinomaster75 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Yeah.lol
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gumballkitty Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Karen's evil
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Student Artist
Mhm XD
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:iconthewalkingarmy:
I now have a army of orcs so i can destroy all of your witches,wizards,solutions,chemical,etc.
Anything that changes people into girls will be destroyed! Also with my new found power i will take over the earth!
Muhahahaha!
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98sparkz Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Student Artist
You've gone mad with power owo'''
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GobboKilla Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, this is very nice~~ by any chance u made a second part, cause if there is, I'm too stupid to find it
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Artist
no second part XD But If I make one you'll be able to see it =w=b
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GobboKilla Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDD I wrote a story (well, three) about revenge once too^^
reminded me a little, though the revenge was cause of something different
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98sparkz Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Student Artist
Ah lol XD Cool
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GobboKilla Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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CyberExedra Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
good story (kinda evil despite the cuteness of the pic and look on the girls face XD ) hope to one day see a alternative story for a picture like this :D
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Artist
yeah XD but the pic goes perfectly to me now he's a cute harmless girl lol XD
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Pokemon381 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
i haft to get one of those needles and besides awesome story
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98sparkz Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks :D
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Ace127 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
I found it really great i hope you do more
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks I will
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:iconpokemontgmaster:
pokemontgmaster Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
keep at it
if you work harder everyday for this next week you should get slightly back to normal
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HyperShadic123 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Downside is, if he still has his memories by the end of this, he'll have plenty of time to think up a revenge of his own.
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Chaos7997 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Me: Well karen you are a mastermind! i congratulate you
did anyone else love the part where jimmy said "Bitch turn me back" i found it hilarious
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blackviper1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Well justice was served. Even if it isn't exactly in proportion
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Division90 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
He deserve it XD .... man his girl friend is pretty evil though and anyway ... its an amusing story , keep it up
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potsticker13 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Short and sweet. Perfect!
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:icon98sparkz:
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks
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doomed-swordmaster Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice and i like the swearing makes it read more dark and adult great stuff
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C10artfan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist
funny, dark but funny
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98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Student Artist
Thanks XD
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C10artfan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist
your welcome
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