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Kris had awakened several hours later to see it was night time and Jayden hadn't come back yet. He began to worry about his lost friend.

"Oh man, I hope he's alright." Kris began to pace before throwing something on. He burst out the door and into the hallway. "Gotta find he-I mean him." He repeated in his head over and over again.

He reached the plaza of the school and looked around for his friend.

"Where is he? Where is he?" Kris thought when a finger tapped his shoulder. He turned to see Lisa, the girl who Jayden almost fought earlier that day. She smiled at him.

"Hey Kris." She said. "What are you doing?" She asked smiling again.

"Oh nothing... Just looking for a friend." He replied turning back around.

"You mean Jayden? I saw him head into that store a second ago." Lisa said before walking off.

"Thanks... Maybe he returned to normal." Kris thought storming into the store which was a bakery. No one was in it except for his changed friend who sat in the back eating a pile of butter cookies with a cup of milk on the side.

"Oh hi Kris!" She signaled him as he walked over and sat down.

"Dude, what the hell are you doing here? You were supposed to be changing back." Kris argued.

"Oh calm down grumpy pants. Wait until I finish my butter cookies." Jamie said continuing to stuff her face.

"Cut it out!" Kris said smacking the cookies onto the floor.

"Hey, what they ever do to you. Your mean." Jamie pouted.

"What are you saying? Look at yourself dude! Your acting like a girl!" Kris said to her.

"I've always acted this way..." She replied emotionless making Kris shudder.

"Huh? No you haven't... Just earlier..."

"It's better this way... Besides, I have moved out of your room and into Lisa's... She's the sweetest." Jamie said, her eyes in bliss while she praised her.

"Just earlier you were arguing with her and now your rooming with her when you were a dude earlier! That doesn't make any sense!!!" Kris jumped up, pissed off completely.

"It's better this way. Besides, I feel much better now than my old self did. I finally feel free and at peace with my self. Just be happy for me." She said, the words hitting Kris harshly. "Now I must go." Jamie walked to the door and opened it but stopped. "If you want to talk then come by my room later. But there's some cookies I bought you, just ask the cashier she has them, toddles." Jamie left.

"What the hell was that? She....He....Completely changed and bagged on his old life... Something is wrong... Very wrong..." Kris repeated.

He walked over to the cashier and she handed him a bag filled with pink colored cookies. He popped some in his mouth and let the sugary taste fill his mouth.

"Dam these are good." He said, forgetting about what just happened for a minute. "But I guess I could stop by there before the boys and girls have to go to separate dorms for the night." Kris said finishing the cookies and heading out into the plaza again. He made his way to the girls side and found Lisa's room. He knocked on the door.

Lisa opened it and smiled again.

"Oh Kris! You made it... My new roommie Jamie said someone would pay us a visit. Come in, Come in." Lisa begged urging Kris in as he accepted.

"Hey Kris..." Jamie, lying on her bed said to Kris who walked in and sat in a chair.

"What brings you here?" Lisa asked.

"She invited me here." Kris pointed towards Jamie who smiled.

"Oh...Tee hee..." Lisa giggled. "I see..." Lisa said sitting in a chair across from Kris. She stared him in his eyes. "So tell me Kris. Why did you always hang out with that Jayden fellow?" She asked.

"Well he's my roommate and my first friend I made coming here." Kris answered. "Sure he is the school's prankster and bad boy but he is nice once you get to know him." Kris said seeing Lisa's smile vanish.

"How could you be friends with such an arrogant ass hole like him? He's done nothing but be a nuisance since he's been here! No one likes him but you and you always defending him makes you look bad by association." She said harshly standing up.

"But i'm nice I have friends and everyone is cool with me hanging out with Jayden...Sometimes..." Kris said.

"Yeah, some times... Its time you gave up on him dude...He's only gonna bring you down in the long run..." She sat back down.

"I don't believe that... Me and him have been friends for a long time so I won't just give up on h-... Woah!!! Ack..." Kris was startled when Lisa angrily threw silver powder in his face, some of it dissolving into his body with out him noticing while he cleaned the rest of it off. "The hell is your problem." Kris asked.

"Oh you stupid fool. I know thats Jayden right there." Lisa pointed out.

"What?" Kris asked in complete shock.

"I'm the one who changed him and sent him to that cookie place. I changed him for the better and now she's my puppet slave who will follow my every order."

"You bitch!" Kris said. "All that cus you argued?" Kris asked jumping up.

"Oh am I?" Lisa smacked Kris, sending him stumbling back. He wanted to hit her but stopped. "I don't hit girls. Be happy i'm a boy. I'll fix this Jamie, Just you wait." He declared walking out.

"We'll see how long that will last." Lisa said to him as he slammed her door shut.

The sun was setting while Kris went to the old clock tower near the school. It would always be no one there around that hour, giving him and Jayden time to vent or rant about their day.

"This sucks that bitch turned my friend. I can't let that go." Kris stormed around pacing. But something felt different about him. He began to feel his hair which had at that point begun to sprout and flow all over his head, covering his face. "The hell?" Was all he could say, moving it out of his face.

Kris's short black hair was now long and soft as it flowed in the wind with two black ribbons tied up on both sides.

"This can't be happening? Why did my hair do this?" Kris asked himself looking around and making sure no one was around.

Next he felt his face twist and turn making him squint in pain for a sec before subsiding. He held his throat for a sec too, feeling like he was being choked a little bit.

"Agh...Weird...Wait...My v-voice!" Kris yelled out in his new higher voice. "My god! Why?" Kris asked, his body was changing before him and he couldn't do anything about it. His arms suddenly began to shrink while his shoulders crashed in and became small. His legs were next as they became sexy and smooth.

"Ohhhh~" Kris moaned a bit while blushing. His hips began to curve out while his butt plumped up making his pants feel loose. "Noooo." Kris snapped trying to keep his loose and big pants from falling off him. He then noticed two huge mounds of flesh form off his chest.

"Oh no...Boobs! They're so huge..." Kris thought to himself while they became DD-Cup size. "That girl must have did this to me..." Kris pondered while his crotch retreated inside him leaving him a fresh new womanhood. "Eeeek...It's gone..." Was all a shocked Kris could say. He was now a girl, and not only that but a girl wearing over fitted boy clothes at a clock tower outside.

"I see your finished Kristy." A voice came from behind Kris who turned to see Lisa and Jamie both smiling at him.

"You bitch, what did you do to me?" Kris shot out in anger.

"Nothing, I just made you better." Lisa replied. "Now, lets get you out of those clothes." She signaled Jamie who instantly rushed Kris, tackling her to the ground.

"Let go off me Jamie! She did this to you!" Kris's cries went on deaf ears.

"I must do whatever she tells me." Was all Jamie said while she took of Kris's entire outfit and replaced it with a pinkish girl uniform and short skirt. She slid off his underwear slid a pair of panties up instead. Finally she replaced his old shoes with a pair much smaller and comfortable. "I am done Lisa. She looks so cute now!" Jamie replied smiling.

"She sure does. How do you feel now Kristy?" Lisa asked putting Kris under the same spell under she put Jayden under.

"I....Fell great! Why do you ask?" Kristy said confused but somehow smiled too...

"Oh no reason, you, me, and Jamie were just about to hit the movie store and look for something scary." Lisa said.

"Oh, your right." Kristy nodded shaking her head. "I'm such a ditz at times. Lets go." She said while Lisa and Jamie smiled happily and turned around.

As the three were headed off a boy in a rush bumped into the three. He stumbled over on the the ground while Kristy looked over him and said "Sorry" but the boy stared at her and blushed, making her ask "Is Something Wrong?"
Here's the final part to is something wrong? Hope you like it...

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HoennHimegoto Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2016  New Deviant
Man poor Kris. He seemed like a nice guy. Lisa could of probably talked to him, instead of the whole mind control thing. 
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  Student Artist
Yeah you really think so?
HoennHimegoto Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2016  New Deviant
She probably could. Kris is such a kind, likable guy. I'm sure he could learn to enjoy being a girl. ;)
98sparkz Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student Artist
Probably :p
JordzillaTheThird Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Student Artist
*alternate reality*

me:I was at the clock tower! It all happened! BELIEVE ME!
police: so your saying a guy turned into a girl right before you eyes?
police: I think your crazy!
me: she has doughnauts
me: wow!
police: dont judge me ;-;

*goes to clock tower*

me: thats where she was!
police: wait. are we counting "it" as a she or he
me: errrr. either
police: okay
me: hey theres some powdery stuff on the ground 0.o
police: WITCHCRAFT!!!!
me: is it cocaine?
police: only one way to test! *sniffs it*
me: now what?
police: it wasnt cocaine ):
me: isnt that a good thing...
police: errrrrr

*10 minutes later (after debating about if cocaine is bad or not)*

me: you look funny
police: no....
me: your hair is growing at like 10 cm per minute
police: um so?
police: *passes out*
me: fuck this shit im outa here
police: *dragged away*
me: *comes back* where did he go?
me: only one way to find out......*sniffs powder also*
me: nope, he was right, wasnt cocaine ):

*10 minutes later*
me: *passed out*
me: *also dragged away*
me: *regaining conciousness* uerghh where am I? and why do I sound like a girl?
me: *fully awake* 0.o I AM A GIRL!
me: its not that bad is it.....I mean im sure i can solve this, right?, RIGHT!?
Lisa: oh no you cannot its permemant.
me: oh no, not you, anything but you. PLZ NO!
Lisa: too late I am preparing my final spell, have a look at your friend over there
Police(woman): Hiya! :D
Lias: then what is happening then?
me: no you are a witch or something
Lisa: actually my father is a scientist
me: and your mother?
Lisa: she invented meth
*chirp chirp chirp*
me: are you gonna finish me off? like in the movies ):
Lisa: somethings not working, the spell went wrong!
me: ohhhhhh...... so like in the movies?
Police(woman): hello? :(
Lisa: I got the spell working HAHAHHAHA...where did she go? 0.o
me: Im not a she!
Lisa: where are you?
me: right...HERE *hits her on head with frying pan*
me: I should probarly run away
Police(woman): why would you want to do that :)?
me: ...bye!
me: *after 300 metres* arghh fuck! its so hard running with theese funbags bouncing around every time I take a step
me: also i lost all of my muscles....maybe I should just give in?
Lisa: I was waiting for you to say that
me: jesus christ! how long have you been there
Lisa: your right. somebody that can make people girls and control them with magic can not teleport or anything like that (sarcasm)
me: well.............are you going to end my soul or not?
Lisa: for giving in, unlike others. im giving you the option to join me
me: can I be a guy?
Lisa: I can give you the ability to change in between genders
me: whats the catch?
Lisa: you have to be a girl 160 hours a week (168 hours a week)
me: Im good with that. But what happens when I join you?
Lisa: you help me turn others into girls, also you get to hang out with the other people that where like you (part 1)
me: sweet :)
Lisa: I think we can become good friends
me: yea :)

*later at night*

Lisa: its so cute when she sleeps......I feel bad for lying about her keeping her soul
me: *faking to be asleep*
Lisa: well time to take her soul
me: *opens eyes* would you really take control of me? take away my life?
Lisa: yes unless........
me: unless what?
Lisa: have sex with me
me: as a guy....
Lisa: as a girl
me: how does that even work...ive always wondered
Lisa: ill show you
*Censored for deviantart* sorry ;3
Lisa: *puffing!!!*
Lisa: you did well for a first time <3
me: i know. I was on fire!
Lisa: maybe you can keep in control of your own body <3
me: really? :3
Lisa: hell yeah even I couldnt have made you do that <3

*The next day*

me: hey lisa :)
Lisa: heeyyy :3
me: how are you
Lisa: listen im sorry...but most of my friends arent actually guys soooo im turning you back into a guy and taking away you power
me: no plz dont!
Lisa: too late its already happening ):
me: *eurghhhh* no.... *arghhhhh!*
me: *passed out*

To Be the commenting writter. btw I may tell you what I Censored....
98sparkz Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Student Artist
Damn this was a mouthful XD; [and sure for censored bits] 
JordzillaTheThird Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Student Artist
that is what I do with 2 hours of my life
98sparkz Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2016  Student Artist
lol damn... 
JordzillaTheThird Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Student Artist
this took like 2 hours to write. can somebody bother to comment at least? :1
charlesbrakley Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
 Watch the Russian flank.
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Student Artist
Russian Flank?
xjax1 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool story sparkz, (finally commented, fourth time I've read it)
 Jason: well that was... Interesting, to say the least, 
(although it's a male name, she is female(long story))
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student Artist
[Its fine!] Thanks man and glad you like it that much :D
leon6er Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
leon:dame it not this school to ender i feel like I'm un lucky *turns around and starts walikng only to get pulled into the same room* fucking hell 
SigmaTheLych Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*saw all of this happen*
me:THIS is unforgivable I have to set this right an-
*sees code red mtn dew*
me:huh holy pirate nipples screw those guys I have a delicious beverage that needs attending to
rnko26 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
id look the other way for dew too
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Artist
SigmaTheLych Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
*turns around screaming*
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Student Artist
SigmaTheLych Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
sallyane Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
wow love this cap if only what a way to end up great cap
98sparkz Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Artist
story you meant XD;
ztarwarzv2 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
"Dear Lisa,

You are a petty, overreacting childish jerk who can't take some teasing. Or anyone close to the teaser. I have experienced worse than you, and you did not need to punish him at all. Thank your lucky stars the transformations you pulled are reversible, else you would be guilty of murder.

Don't make me come there in person,
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Artist
Lisa: *Reads tosses in thrash and walks off* ;p
ztarwarzv2 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
"Dear Lisa,

Are you at all sorry for what you have done?

98sparkz Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Artist
Lisa: Hmmmmm *Replies* a bit but its fine now they're okay with it.
ztarwarzv2 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
"Are they, or is their new mind okay with it?"
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Artist
Lisa: Mhm.
ztarwarzv2 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
"That does not answer my question in the slightest. I am going over there, and fixing their memories NOW."
shockman21 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Awesome. Kinda want it to happen to me
"Oh no reason, you, Jamie, and I were about to hit the movie store and look for something scary."

"Oh, ok" said Kristy, pulling a large mallet from hyperspace and hitting the store with it.

Meanwhile, Lisa and Jamie had found several copies of "Kazaam", "Mac and Me", and "An Inconvenient Truth". After renting that, the three went back to the dorm, best buds (sort of) for life.

(An alternate ending, with a little political humor)
98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Artist
Yeah, cause nothing's scarier than Al Gore with a slide projector and an audience.
98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Artist
i'll say
Yeah, we had an ice storm in Florida two weeks ago.
98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student Artist
ah hope your alright....
Oh I'm fine. Al Gore's credibility and that of global warming, however, is not.
98sparkz Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Artist
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C10artfan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist
there's a lot of Karma to feed back on Lisa
MarsCam Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Student General Artist
all this over a couple over reactions? still a good story though .P
98sparkz Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Artist
Jyroscopic Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The more of your stories I read, the more I begin to wonder: WHY ARE WE NOT FUNDING THIS?!
Soulfeaster Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2013
My main problem with this is why did Kris' hair change color? I was reading this and looked at the part involving Kris' hair but no mention of color (sorry if I sound mean but I am a confused soul eating penguin)
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Student Artist
meh its alright and hey anything can happen when he changed XD color changes anything OWO
Soulfeaster Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
I know, but for some odd reason after reading enough work by a deviant artist/composer, you can kinda start to read through the stuff and take new looks at the deviation, so just keep on posting and I will become a happy panda
Masterdeath511 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Hmm I could see a interesting battle between this girl and a user of geass what a wonderful sight it would be short but wonderful being able to use these powers in a mind game and if you would be so kind as to add a new character and hey can I give you my ideas on how the new character would look like I just have some really good ones
CyberExedra Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Wow when might this continue
98sparkz Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Student Artist
Hmmm I guess if someone wants or when I have free time ^_^
deathbewithyou Featured By Owner May 22, 2012   Writer
I find the "Is Something Wrong" so sad. I mean look at this story. A guy's best friend gets turned into a girl and brainwashed and then he comes next. I had so much tears in my eyes. Lisa said that Jayden was a a big jerk but look at what she did. This makes her no better than him.
Jteam6 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
EXACTLY! Actually It makers her worse, she's basicly killing them.
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